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will this is bramblestar sing a song (you can pick what you what him to be singing)
ashfur WAS going to sing but brambleclaw is rocking out.
hawkfroust:mousdoug....
ashfur:show off
crowfeather thinking: great all my girls are all over him...
and you can guess what the she's are thinking there are squirrelflight,leafpool and feathertail.....
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Well First i will start with negatives. I think the legs need to be facing the watchers because the face is facing us. If you like the legs facing the way than maybe turn the face to the side. I think thats what you have to work on. I also think you need to work a little bit more on the spot-light. It needs to look more like a light not so much a solid. This isnt negative, i just dont understand the headband and earing but i think its a cute idea. I think the tail needs a bit more life...its kind of just laying there like a stick. I would have it pointed up because he is happy to be in the spot light. As for postitives, I LOVE THE EYES ON BRAMBLE CLAW! Also i love the cats in the background- they so cute. My fav is Ashfur <3. Keep up the good work <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>